Tuesday, August 4, 2009

Marly a dog like no other

Dear classmates,

In the book Marly a dog like no other evrey one who loved Marly was saying there last good byes. As Marlys family had there first scare when Marly had to go to the vet because he had twisted his stomach when he was 13 there was a big risk then he started to age more as the Grogans bought chicks not know that there wasonly one girl and the rest were boys and they had 3 boys doing nothing but cock-a-doodle-do soon Marly became death.Then the last scare was when the Grogans came to home from vacation and brought Marly home , John (the writer) soon realized how big Marlys stomach was it looked just like it did when it was twisted. As he took him to the vet Marly was to old for the risk, but Marly had a long life. When it was time the family gathered together and buried Marly . Andthat night they all shared all of the funny memories they had with Marly.

8 comments:

daddy's girl said...

did you have any reactions, connections, or a vizulizaion?

Alicia said...

that doesn't really make sense....

es said...

the events are pretty random

ap said...

your events are unorginized. And i dont understand.

J.A. said...

I Don’t Understand? And Was There Any CROP-QV Things You Had To Say?

Ms. English said...

SD,

Thanks for the summary. Next time, please read over it very carefully before you publish to check for two things: 1)Does what I wrote make sense?, and 2) Did I include my thoughts about what I've been reading (CROP-QV is a good place to start)?

Happy Reading,
Ms. E

Dromed said...

Um.... are u saying a dog suffers till it dies?

J.A. said...

this makes no sence!