Tuesday, November 17, 2009

NEW MOON/eclipse!!

Hey class!!

i just finished new moon! It was a very good book nobody died yet! i loved that book SO much but i have to say that i like eclipse even more! Eclipse has more detail and more action from my perspective so i am going to tell you about eclipse:)

Eclipse is the 3rd book in the twilight saga! so i am going to tell you about it. SO far Jacob comes to Bella's school and he came to annoy Edward about how Emmet crossed the line! Bella was confused because Edward had not told her anything about that! Jacob kept annoying Bella and sand asking Edward why he didn't tell Bella not to have the question answered but to have the question make Bella mad at Edward!! Bella got annoyed with Jacob and told him to leave:)

The next day Edward left for a hunting trip that was supposed to be 2-3 days but ended up not to be even 1 day! That happened because Alice couldn't see where Bella was since she was hanging out with Jacob! That frightened Edward so he went to her house!

he left again the next day and Bella and Alice were planning to have a slumber party! Alice was very excited! when i say very i mean (very,very excited) But when Alice drove Bella home all Bella wanted to do was go to bed! Alice lead her to the room she was sleeping in (Edwards room) it had a big bed and a bunch of nice pillows on the bed!! Alice said goodnight to Bella and Bella laid down!

Then Bella heard a knock at her door! she thought it was Alice but it was really Rosalie! That is very unexpected since Bella and Rosalie aren't what you call close! Rosalie said "its me Rosalie can i come in?" Bella of course as nice as she is said "of course you can" Rosalie cam in and said "Bella the reason i am here is to tell you that i think you should stay human! Know i don't want to hurt your feelings but if i were you and could have the choice i would stay human instead of turning into a vampire! you see i didn't have the choice and i am going to tell you the story! remember this story does not have a happy ending so here i go... When i was young my parents were middle class they were very wealthy and everything but they wanted more. So my Beautyness was on of the best things that happened to them! They were glad about that very glad! I had never been jealous of anyone until one Day that was! One day i was going to visit my friend Vera! she had a husband and a cute little boy! her little boy had black curly hair! All the sudden i became jealous of her! I WANTED TO BE MARRIED AND HAVE A LITTLE DAUGHTER OR SON!! i had never been jealous of anyone so i really wanted this. One day i found a perfect match his name was Royce king . His dad was the owner of the bank that my dad worked at. he and i got married in two months we had barely know each other. One day i was walking home and i really wished i had called my dad but i was SO close to home so i didn't bother. it was Royce (my husband) and five of his friends! they were drunk and drinking beer! Royce said "he res my Rosie isn't she more beautiful than all of your Georgia peach girls" "yes they all said with giggles" They hurt me sooo badly as in physically hurt! I was about to die i was just laying their! That's how carlisle found me. He Edward and Esme found me and carlisle turned me into a vampire at first i didn't believe it and then i did! edward didn't think that was a good idea that i was being turned into a vampire. that was the story and bella if i were you well i would do anything to be you with that choice if i were you i would say no because if i could i would but i had no chance to. The reason i disliked you was because i was jealous, jealous that edward wanted you and not me. Bella said "but dont you want emmet? Rosalie said"yes i don't mean that i want edward i meant that i was jealous since he liked you and not me and usually all the boys likd me! Will you consider not being a vampire? Bella said "if i think about will you not hate me? rosalie said "maybe and then said gooodnight bella!

Alice drove bella to school in the morning but bella escaped from school with jacob.

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4 comments:

CD said...

y did u use so much enter key...thats waht gets u a 0 on tests...and this is graded. nice knowing ya...

es said...

alot of people are choosing sides. do you like edward or jacob better? to me, edward is too overprotective and jacob is a little obnoxious and everyone can tell that he is very jealous

SD said...

i like Edward he is just perfect in every way and i can just imagen the croked smile that Bella likes.

And by the way i loved your blog it was awsome,nice job.


Why did Jacob and Bella sneak out of scool earlie?

SD said...

sorry i forgot the "h" in school.