Friday, August 14, 2009

Abby Hayes Every cloud Has A Silver Lining

Dear ,Class as you know i have been reading abby hayes!Right know abby has just told her dad about trying out for soccer! He signs the permission slip and she is officially on the soccer team!:) yay! Unfortantley she doesnt know if she wants to be on the team anymore. Which i think she should be cause she went to alot of efffort to get better at it!:) I am very upset that abby doesnt want to do it ! she thinks to herself taht she doesnt want to give up anymore! Abyy said that because she woould dissapoint her friends and her dad. Thats is all i have read for know bye and thanks for your time!:)
Sincerly, lb

2 comments:

es said...
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Ms. English said...

Dear LB,

What made Abby unsure about being on the team? Has her sister found out about her playing soccer yet? How did her dad react when she told him she wanted to play?

Keep giving us more thoughts!
Ms. E